I know this sounds really stupid and random but my birthday is on December 11th so this makes me feel special. xD I'm reading your fanfiction and so far I'm up to the bit where it's explaining Libby's 12'th birthday...on December the 11th. I just instantley love this fanfiction more
LOL I'm glad your brother and I are so like-minded. Strike what I just said... that's actually disturbing. If April pads her butt, it's obviously because Nav continually approves of her AHEM war tactics.
I think that, if anything, your border is detracting from the scene. If you took it out and expanded the bg, the image might have a stronger impact. Just some o' dat food for thought (delicious, chocolatey food?).
ALSO no I shouldn't because my gory art weeps tears of desperation while looking at your gory art and proceeds to rip its abdomen open.